It was a crazy weekend. R was on his way back up north, and I was running back and forth between his house and mine, plus working on two different edits. One of them, as you know, was Consent. Good book; you’re going to like it. 🙂
Here are two more sample edits for you to peruse.
Two different genres, two different styles of writing. Both writers have a good grasp of their craft, but we can all improve. Becoming aware of what you’re saying as you write is the first step. Hear it, and you’ll start to realize what needs changing or deleting. Becoming a good writer is a process. Few of us, if any, are born knowing how to write well. We have to learn it.
I was sitting with a neighbor watching the canal when a heron flew in and began looking for food in the shallows. I had the camera along and was lucky enough to get a shot of it with dinner in its mouth. I wonder if they get pissed when the fish accidentally gets away? Do birds get angry, or is that a human thing?
I have another busy week ahead of me, but I plan to enjoy every minute! See you Friday.