Five Warning Signs Your Story Needs Revision

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Kristen Lamb's Blog

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We can have the best story ideas in the world, but to be blunt? There’s a lot to be said for delivery. While these problems might seem picky, there are some fundamental errors that can weaken the writing. If our writing loses power, this can become distressing or distracting to readers.

Many readers (not being editors or professional writers) might not be able to articulate specifically why they lost interest in a story, but often the answer is simple. It can be an accumulation of the small things. The little foxes spoil the vine.

Most of us make one or more of these errors, especially when we’re new. Hey, that’s called “being NEW.” No one is born with the natural ability to write brilliant, perfect novels coded into their DNA. It takes time and practice, so give yourself permission to make…

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2 Responses to Five Warning Signs Your Story Needs Revision

  1. Patricia says:

    None of those “mistakes” in Precog In Peril or I wouldn’t have read the whole trilogy.

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