I’m currently revamping Blue River, a time travel story I got the rights back to. I’m excited about the changes happening to this one, as it was written to fit a certain length and there is so much more story that can be told. I’m readying this one for a May 1 release.
These six sentences begin the story.
“What if the story is true?” Randy asked, passing me a joint.
I shrugged, pinched the hand-rolled smoke between my fingers, and inhaled through pursed lips, feeling the burn go deep into my lungs. After I blew it out, I said, “Then we enjoy a nice morning walk on a pleasant day in the canyon. Where did Doug say this space/time hole was?”
He laughed. “You don’t remember?”
Tomorrow: Writers Writing Badly, Part 2.